Saturday, April 13, 2013

Indie-Licious Blog Hop ~ Indelible (7)

Happy Sunday!!! Time for the Indie-licious Blog Hop! Sorry I missed last week, but I'm back now with another teaser from Indelible, the New Adult Contemporary that I am currently working on.

In the last teaser, Judd asked Sam out, and when she didn't jump at the chance, she only intrigued him more. This clip is after she leaves Judd in the coffee shop and goes to pick up her daughter from her friend, Molly's house.

Please remember this is an unedited first draft. Please let me know what you think!


            “Actually,” I began as I tried to stand back up and balance Karrie in my arms. “I was asked out on a date for Friday night.”

            “Really?” Molly asked, her eyes lit up as her lips spread into a grin. “Do I know him?”

            “I doubt it,” I replied. “I met him at the bar the other night, he knows James.”

            Molly grimaced at the mention of the other girl; she and James didn’t get along.

            “I’m not sure if I’m going to go though,” I said.

            “Why not? You need to go on more dates. Going without sex as long as you have isn’t healthy.”

            “Hey,” I exclaimed, covering Karrie’s ears pointedly. “Language.”

            “Oh, please,” Molly said with a short laugh. “They don’t know what I’m saying.”

            I just shook my head at her and walked towards the door.

            “I’m serious, Sam,” Molly said, putting her hand on my shoulder to stop me. “You’re young; you deserve a night out with a nice guy.”

            “Well,” I said with a smile, thinking of Judd. “I don’t know if I’d call him a nice guy, but there’s something about him that intrigues me. I can’t quite put my finger on it,” I turned back and grinned at her. “Oh yeah, it might be his rock hard body and killer smile.”

            “Bitch,” Molly laughed. “That’s it, you’re going!”
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  1. Haha! Great teaser this week, Bethany!

  2. Loved this one! Made me laugh :)

  3. That sounds like a perfectly nice guy to me! YUMY! <3

  4. Nice. Fun exchange between then and I want to know more about this Judd and his rock hard body.

  5. Loved the banter between friends! Great teaser, Bethany :)

  6. Thanks, guys. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for stopping by.