Sunday, March 24, 2013

Indie-licious Blog Hop ~ Untitled (5)

Happy Sunday! Time for another Indie-licious Blog Hop. I'm going to give you another snippet from my current WIP, tentatively titled: Indelible (Thanks to Christie Rich for the suggestion).
I'd love to hear your thoughts on the title, and the teaser!

Judd's POV

I pushed through my last set, grunting as I lifted the weights over my head. Tuck, the guy I worked out with every morning, and one guys on the team that I was cool with, spotted me from above.

“How was the bar Saturday night?” Tuck asked as I struggled to catch my breath.

 I swigged some water and wiped the sweat from my brow before answering. “Alright,” I responded. “Caught a couple good games.”

 Tuck was the blonde All-American preppy type, but I didn’t hold it against him. He was quick on third and could run faster than most, plus he was always up for a good time.

 “Any hot chicks?” He asked, positioning himself on the bench.

“There was one that had a great ass, but nothin’ much happened there” I said, drinking more water to try and sooth my burning throat.

“Couldn’t close?” Tuck mocked with a raised eyebrow and a shit-eating grin.

 “Shit,” I grinned back at him. “I can close any day of the week. I was just laying the groundwork.”

 Thanks for stopping by!

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  1. Got some cocky going on. Sounds like a typical guy fest. And you're welcome, I kind of hope the suggestion sticks because I like it ;)

  2. Great portrayal from a guys POV! It's so typical of a guys convo. I like that he's "laying the ground work"

  3. Hahahaha! I love seeing stuff like this from a guy's perspective, it was awesome!

  4. Bethany, you are such a tease! That teaser was awesome and I am dying to know what you plan to name this novel. I am really looking forward to it! ;-)

    Elle C.

  5. Thanks for stopping by! I'm happy you like it. :)

  6. A great teaser this week! I love seeing things like this from a guy's pov. And I really like the tentative title, too.

  7. I also loved this guy's pov! You did it very well!